Intrigued – A story of love

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He was roaming around listlessly,

Waiting for the night to set in

Just as the last rays on sun vanished and the night set in

There was a flick and she came into sight

She was caged, but there was a glow around her

As he went closer he could feel her warmth

She seemed to smile while dancing in the cage

But he was intrigued of how could there be happiness in confinement.

He tried to get her attention but was dazed by her radiance

She looked at him and he realized she had sadness in her eyes

He tried getting closer, but she kept pushing him away

She seemed to beg, asking him to leave

But he was captivated by love, and ignored her pleas

He flew higher and higher till he could almost touch her

And then there was a burst, a crackle and he fell

Lifeless, but with a smile on his face

He had managed to hold her and profess his love

She continued dancing in the night with sorrow in her heart

Another intrigued moth had died in her arms.

Linking this post to A-Z Challenge with Blogchatter

Post Author: nehagpatwardhan

Neha Tambe is a freelance social media marketer, writer and influencer. Founder and Owner of nehatambe.com.

17 thoughts on “Intrigued – A story of love

    Anna Tan (@natzers)

    (April 11, 2017 - 12:16 pm)

    Huh Poor thing.

    Anna

    Dhruti Patwardhan

    (April 11, 2017 - 12:35 pm)

    Good one

      nehagpatwardhan

      (April 11, 2017 - 12:38 pm)

      Thanks Dhruti

    shalzmojo

    (April 11, 2017 - 12:40 pm)

    Oh I didn’t guess till the end that it was moths you were talking about. Beautiful composition, kept up the suspense throughout.

      nehagpatwardhan

      (April 11, 2017 - 4:22 pm)

      Thanks Shalini. Happy to know that you enjoyed reading it

    Mal Raj

    (April 11, 2017 - 1:59 pm)

    That was a beautiful read!! 🙂

      nehagpatwardhan

      (April 11, 2017 - 4:23 pm)

      thanks

    Shalini (@kohleyedme)

    (April 11, 2017 - 4:43 pm)

    Sanch @ Sanch Writes

    (April 11, 2017 - 5:04 pm)

    Enjoyed the build up…it was intriguing as we tried to find out who it was. Sad but beautiful piece. Very visual
    Inverted Refrain – Numb

      nehagpatwardhan

      (April 11, 2017 - 5:22 pm)

      Thanks Sanch for stopping and Reading. Happy A-Z to you

    Kaddu

    (April 11, 2017 - 5:12 pm)

    Oh! I didn’t see that coming!
    You built up the suspense well, Neha. I actually read it again to see if I missed it, but no. Nothing gave any clue of what was coming!
    Brilliant!
    Glad to land on your blog during this challenge.
    Happy AtoZing!
    Chicky @ http://www.mysteriouskaddu.com

      nehagpatwardhan

      (April 11, 2017 - 5:20 pm)

      Thanks and happy that you enjoyed reading. Happy A-Z to you too

    Rajlakshmi

    (April 11, 2017 - 5:25 pm)

    wow I didn’t realize it was a moth till the end and kept wondering who He was. Wonderful write.

    Namratha Varadharajan

    (April 11, 2017 - 6:39 pm)

    As others have said more you kept me hooked till the end trying to figure out who she and he were. Well written.
    Celebrating ‘Women & their work’ all April:INSPIRATIONAL INDIAN WOMAN: ACID ATTACK SURVIVOR LAXMI

    inquisitivegeet

    (April 11, 2017 - 10:17 pm)

    O this is so so so beautiful Neha! It really touched my heart and brought lot of memories!

    Cheers
    BoisterousBee

    Anmol Rawat

    (April 11, 2017 - 11:53 pm)

    Moth it was 🙂
    It was a surprise, but the tale ended on a sad note. Beautiful piece! 🙂

    Vartika Gakhar

    (August 30, 2018 - 1:52 am)

    Poignant yet beautiful tale Neha.

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