What an obnoxious fool he is, someone exclaimed, while others just ignored him. Virendra was clueless about why people didn’t react the way he expected them to. But one thing was sure; He didn’t like this city life too much.

Virendra was an 80-year-old zamindar living in a big haveli, in a far-flung village. He was the pseudo king there. Everyone knew him and revered him. People willingly did his work and he could afford to just bark orders. He was the law and the bank. He was the most knowledgeable there. His word was final and nobody dared question his decisions. Even public transport and temple aartis were scheduled based on his arrival.

Now he had come to stay with his son for a few days, in a big city. And everything seemed weird right from the start. After spending crore’s, all his son owned was a pigeon-hole for a home and yet it was supposed to be the best.

There were too many people everywhere and nobody seemed to listen to his orders. His wishes were not fulfilled just because he was a zamindar. And nobody knew him for who he was and this infuriated him to the core. He was confused why the neighbor’s son, won’t press his legs and why were dogs sitting on the sofa instead of roaming in the gardens below. He hated it that if he wanted something he had to get up and take it as there was nobody on his call 27*7. The worst was nobody stopped and listened to his stories – be it home or at the local grocer. He missed the spotlight, he missed being the elitist.

In this big city all he ended up being was an obnoxious old man.

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Post Author: nehagpatwardhan

Neha Tambe is a freelance social media marketer, writer and influencer. I studied mass communication and worked in various capacities spanning from journalism, copywriting to social media marketing. Blogging from the past 4 years. Founder and Owner of nehatambe.com.

14 thoughts on “Obnoxious


    (April 18, 2017 - 6:26 pm)

    Another Good one Neha. Old age and loneliness is a bad combination.


    (April 18, 2017 - 7:26 pm)

    This is so very true! The elder people need to catch up with the today’s generation in order to stay connected or else they will only end up in isolation!



      (April 18, 2017 - 7:34 pm)

      Thanks geeta


      (April 19, 2017 - 10:29 am)

      Rightly said Geeta. Thanks for stopping by

    Roma Gupta

    (April 18, 2017 - 7:31 pm)

    I like the way you brought up visible but neglected truth of humanity.


      (April 18, 2017 - 7:33 pm)

      Thanks Roma


      (April 19, 2017 - 10:29 am)

      Thanks Roma. Visible but neglected… I smell a post idea here 🙂


    (April 18, 2017 - 7:45 pm)

    Right, Old and New need to reach the mid-line.


      (April 19, 2017 - 10:28 am)

      So True Upasana. Thanks for stopping by


    (April 18, 2017 - 10:35 pm)

    I am old (61) and somewhat set in my ways, but I love to learn. I am probably the most technologically skilled of the people I know. Why not? Why stay in the past when the future is so exciting?
    I feel sorry for Virendra, who did not change with the times.


      (April 19, 2017 - 10:28 am)

      More power to you Cheryl. I hope I keep my enthusiasm and interest in learning something new alive. Evolution and reinventing ourselves is a need of the day today. Thanks for stopping by


    (April 19, 2017 - 1:05 pm)

    Wow, his perception must have changed and his ego might have been badly hit in the city life.

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      (April 19, 2017 - 1:50 pm)

      So true! Classic case of frog in a well

    Nilanjana Bose

    (April 20, 2017 - 1:45 am)

    Well, some people need to get over themselves, old or young! Old age is easier if the obnoxiousness is drained out at when young.
    Thanks for your visit.
    Best wishes,

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